Mind checking out an excerpt of my story?Just want to get others' opinions of it. Do you like it? Dislike it? What do you like/dislike about it in particular?
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In the distance, the spires of Ebyss Castle stood, the violet stone
Hey Lily
Ah, well, I'm going to join the club and say it's great as usual. The thing I love best about your writing is that it's described so well that you really do create vivid images in the reader's head.
I also agree