How does this story sound?It's not finished yet, but I want some people's opinions on how it's going to turn out.
Introduction
My dream of when I get older kind of evolved from disappointment and discovery. I believe that if I save enough money until
It's good. You could add more detail. Your voice is excellent, though.
It shows that the protagonists cares for animals, and has a heart.
Please, answer mine.
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In your main hand, you can wield a dagger that allows for close range spells, or a scepter which can shoot those fireballs a little bit further. You can also hold a dagger or focus item in your offhand to add a few more skills to your arsenal.
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